12-16-2011, 09:16 AM
[quote name='Xastoul' timestamp='1323956142' post='13808']
Btw, two thing I was not able to correct was green spot on the grass ( under Smith tombstone) and
the noise in the tree (middle left) the one in front of the green pine.
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Hi,
I see no problem of the noise in the tree; spot removal tool should work for that green spot on the grass, and the other one in the sky (near the cloud, left side). It is a nice warm light in the pic, giving somehow peacefull mood, which is appopriate for such place. Compositional approach is very subjective and personal, so it is hard to criticize. I personally would not included buildings on the left side, leaving only thombs and chapel; chose longer focal lenght and stepped back for slightly more compressed perspective, diminishing empty grass areas. However, thats just my personal point of view. BTW, I thing this picture should look very nice at spring/early summer, with blue sky, green grass&trees and poped out orange chapel <img src='http://forum.photozone.de/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='
' /> .
A.
Btw, two thing I was not able to correct was green spot on the grass ( under Smith tombstone) and
the noise in the tree (middle left) the one in front of the green pine.
[/quote]
Hi,
I see no problem of the noise in the tree; spot removal tool should work for that green spot on the grass, and the other one in the sky (near the cloud, left side). It is a nice warm light in the pic, giving somehow peacefull mood, which is appopriate for such place. Compositional approach is very subjective and personal, so it is hard to criticize. I personally would not included buildings on the left side, leaving only thombs and chapel; chose longer focal lenght and stepped back for slightly more compressed perspective, diminishing empty grass areas. However, thats just my personal point of view. BTW, I thing this picture should look very nice at spring/early summer, with blue sky, green grass&trees and poped out orange chapel <img src='http://forum.photozone.de/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='
' /> .A.