10-14-2011, 10:05 AM
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You're welcome, Ian. And I agree, there's some nice shots on Miro's site - it's good to absorb as much landscape photography as you can, but also to analyse the composition.
Looking back at the B&W versions of your photos, how do you feel about the new crop? I prefer the cropped version, but I feel it's now a tad too wide.
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Hi Pinhole,
I agree - the crop has improved the composition, and warming the image has helped, too
Here are (probably! <img src='http://forum.photozone.de/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='' />) my last two 'goes' at this image... cropped narrower, one B&W, one warmer colours, grad filter on the sky...
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Arv: your version isn't how I see this image at all (!), but do leave it here for comparison..!! <img src='http://forum.photozone.de/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/biggrin.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='' />
Ian
You're welcome, Ian. And I agree, there's some nice shots on Miro's site - it's good to absorb as much landscape photography as you can, but also to analyse the composition.
Looking back at the B&W versions of your photos, how do you feel about the new crop? I prefer the cropped version, but I feel it's now a tad too wide.
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Hi Pinhole,
I agree - the crop has improved the composition, and warming the image has helped, too
Here are (probably! <img src='http://forum.photozone.de/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='' />) my last two 'goes' at this image... cropped narrower, one B&W, one warmer colours, grad filter on the sky...
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Arv: your version isn't how I see this image at all (!), but do leave it here for comparison..!! <img src='http://forum.photozone.de/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/biggrin.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='' />
Ian