[mst]

Reflection in a store window in my home town. Does this work for you?







-- Markus

[edge]

I'm assuming you are trying to play with the contrast between a Ferrari and an old person using a walker?

Good idea, but I'm not sure about the execution.

My eye keeps being drawn to the bicycle's handle rather than the car/person.

[Sibbi]

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Reflection in a store window in my home town. Does this work for you?



-- Markus

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Yeah Markus - great Idea - however, I also concentrate to much on the bicycle...



Bye, Sebastian

[Guest]

[quote name='mst' date='15 June 2010 - 11:33 PM' timestamp='1276637597' post='547']

Reflection in a store window in my home town. Does this work for you?







-- Markus

[/quote]



No; It's hard to see that the red thing is a Ferrari. The bicycle is very distracting. There's a lot of other clutter (the shadow, the other cars). A more front-on picture with a slightly lower angle would make the Ferrari more obvious and less like a mistake, as well as remove some of the distractions.



-Lars

[DonAndre]

Great juxtaposition! Perfect.